“In exactly 99 words write only dialogue in response to the photo prompt.”
– a prompt for this week’s CW piece.
[Source: @CarrotRanch]
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Below, please find two of my entries.
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“Hey. Hey, you!”
“Shhh, I’m trying to take a nap here.”
“You came here to take a nap?”
“I brought a class of unruly teenagers to roam around the zoo to get some peace and quiet.”
“Well, isn’t it convenient?”
“Yes, it’s a genius plan. You have to admit. Now, please, go. Go away.”
“I need your eyes.”
“You WHAT?”
“I need your EYES.”
“I heard you the first time, but what di… oh, umm…”
“I have no eyes of my own, so I thought I could have yours, since apparently you don’t use those…”
“KIIIIIIIIIIIDS? We’ve gotta go!”
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“Brother Pang?”
“I’m too old for this.”
“Is that you, Pang?”
“What was I thinking having all these drinks last night?”
“ANSWER ME”
“Huh? Who? What? Where?”
“My poor brother. What have they done to you?”
“Teddy? Where are you? Is that you?”
“Stop freaking out.”
“Is my hangover THAT bad? Am I now seeing and hearing things?”
“Listen, brother, I know someone who owes me a favor. We can get you back to your normal form.”
“Normal form? That’d be great. My head is pounding.”
“The spell has you confused. I’ll get you help. Don’t worry.”
“Quiet, please.”
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Which version do you like more? The first, or the second?
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P.S. As always, you are more than welcome to use this prompt to inspire your post. If you decide to write something, be sure to pingback to this post, so that I can get an alert and check out your post. (A post on how to do pingbacks can be found here.) If pingbacks are not your thing, feel free to simply leave a link to your piece in the comment section below. The more, the merrier!
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Hahahaha, the first one was the keeper
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Immensely
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I like the first one also. There is something worse than unruly teenagers. LOL
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Hahahah. Yes, indeed. Thank you.
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I like the first version!! It was fun and unpredictable 🙂
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Why thank you!! I was hoping for the element of surprise to work.
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The first one had me laughing like crazy 😂
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Glad to hear.
The photo had me stumped for a bit. But then it hit me. I wanted something RIDICULOUS, so people could go: “WHAT?”
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Well, you got what you wanted. I didn’t predict an end like that. 😂
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Cool, you uploaded it on here!
I also like the first one and I understand why it had you laughing. Did the same to me.
Maybe I should post mine as well!
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At first, I wasn’t going to, but then I found myself not able to decide on a new CW piece. It came in handy.
I’m headed your way to read yours.
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First one was great! I like this prompt.
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Thanks, Ben!
I post CW (creative writing pieces) once a week. Feel free to join in and write your own stuff with some of the prompts I write about.
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Cool I’ll try the next one
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Sounds like a plan.
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I like the first one better. its kind of funny.
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Why thank you.
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I think I am in the minority. I like the second one.
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Why thank you. I know the first one was more “out there”, but I enjoyed writing the second one, too, so thanks for appreciating.
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Definitely the first one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~B
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Thanks!
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“I need your eyes” omg hahaha! That’s creepy PERRRRRFECT for this time of the year!
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Thank you!
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Really humorous
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Which one?
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All of it. 😃
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Thank you.
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I like the first one better😂
Although, both of them are hilarious! I’ve nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award
You’ll find the rules in this post
https://fictivefinesseff.wordpress.com/2018/10/18/sunshine-blogger-award/
Can’t wait to read your answers!☺
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Thanks for stopping by and taking a read. AND nominating me!
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hahahahahaha!!! The first one was confusing, but I enjoyed both of them. Not sure which one is better.
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Thanks, Rachel.
The prompt was confusing all around.
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Yes, it was confusing, I admit. But I like your answers to the prompt.
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