“Write a poem from the perspective of a pirate ship captain writing to the woman he loves.”
– a prompt for this week’s CW piece.
[Source: @DailyPrompt]
Daphne:
When we were together
you wanted to go to the beach,
but I thought that was the greatest kitsch,
so I blamed it on the weather.
You say you’re in love with the sea,
but there’s nothing greater than the ocean, my Chickpea.
You listen to the ocean in your shell,
but you don’t realize that some of the waves put me through hell.
I wanted to ask you to join me in a life of crime,
but I know it couldn’t be your pastime.
So I’ll sell some of the gold,
for when we get old.
And on the beach we shall lay,
and watch the ships come into the bay.
For you love me and my hook,
and it doesn’t matter that I can’t cook.
Grocery bags you hang on it
and we hurry home so you can knit.
My love is vast like the ocean.
Deep as the sea.
Yours is bright like the lightning.
Strong as the wind.
Marry me, my Sweet Lady
and your treasure only I will loot.
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Wow, what a great job. I really enjoyed this, well done with that prompt.
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Thanks, Ash. Happy almost-Friday!
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You’re welcome and same to you.
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thank you for an enjoyable read!
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This is brilliantly written! ❤️
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Thank you!
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Well, I tried my hand. I do hope it’s alright. 😅
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I shall head over there right now.
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This is awesome! I love the rhyme.
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Thank you!
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This. Is. A. Masterpiece. I love it!
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Thank you, Meher!
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Excellent!
And thank you for the link to @DailyPrompt, which I’m now following… I need more muse triggers like those it offers 🙂
This comment was brought to you courtesy of ?Random Raiders! 🙂
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RR is awesome not only for finding potentially dead links (for the writer) and old content (for the reader), but also for nostalgia (for the writer). I re-read that piece and laughed. Some great parts, some so-so, but overall – FUN!
@DailyPrompt used to be my go-to for the longest time. After a while, I noticed that the prompts get recycled, but you have to go through quite a few to notice that. Let us know if you choose to publish something inspired by the prompt on your blog. My hope was that I would spark a group of people that would participate regularly, boosting one another’s creativity, but that has not happened as of yet. The Carrot Ranch and BBprompts are great blogs for prompts (CR once a week, BB once a month), if you wanted to research more. I like them for the communities (though, they are not perfect).
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I’m so glad to hear that you find ?Random Raiders! worthwhile. So… I don’t like to be pushy, but: is there any chance you might create a post extolling its virtues? 😉
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You got it. Though I’m not sure when and how. (Creating draft now!)
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Wonderful! 🙂 Let me know when it’s live so I can reblog it 😀
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Oh, you’ll definitely get a pingback!
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